Geoffrey and Kristy kick off with the 80s classic Monster Squad, then break down a great subtext moment from the new F1 film. They unpack “on-the-nose” dialogue vs character voice, when to cut redundancy, and how to spot predatory “producer” offers. Listener Q&A covers why watching movies improves your craft and whether short action lines beat long descriptive blocks.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode
• How to spot and write effective subtext in quiet scenes
• A quick gut-check to avoid on-the-nose dialogue
• When longer action lines help vs hurt
• Red flags for scammy “producers” and safer platforms to consider
• A simple note-taking method to level up how you watch films

Key Moments
00:23 Welcome with Kristy
01:04 Why Monster Squad still lands
03:46 F1 takeaways and a subtext masterclass
07:31 On-the-nose dialogue and finding voice
12:53 The 50 percent “producer” red flag
15:47 Vetting platforms and why Geoffrey trusts InkTip
20:19 Q&A Watching movies to get better
24:14 Q&A Short vs long action lines
29:04 Wins of the week and encouragement

About the Guest
Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter and producer with a background in development and story evaluation. She champions character-driven genre projects and mentors emerging writers.

About the Host
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned
• The Monster Squad 1987
• The Lost Boys 1987
• Shane Black scripts for voice study
• F1 film as a subtext case study
• InkTip
• Coverfly mention and why vetting matters
• The Guide for Every Screenwriter

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun
Website TheSuccessfulScreenwriter.com
Instagram @screenwriterpod
YouTube The Successful Screenwriter

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#Screenwriting #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #AmWriting #FilmCommunity #IndieFilm #ScriptNotes #WritingTips #Dialogue #Subtext #Storytelling #WritersLife #MonsterSquad #ShaneBlack #LostBoys #MovieChat #FilmDiscussion #WritingCommunity #ScriptAdvice #OnTheNoseDialogue #ProtectYourWork

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Geoffrey is joined by Kristy Leigh for a special live taping of Episode 287. They dive into the unique narrative style of Weapons, compare it with Barbarian, break down the shocking twists of 28 Years Later, and share some truly questionable “screenwriting advice” floating around the industry. Plus: a discussion on the new concept of the thumbnail pitch

What You’ll Learn in This Episode

• How shifting POV can change the audience’s entire experience (Weapons)
• Why themes of grief, tragedy, and perspective make stories resonate
• The shocking ending of 28 Years Later and what it sets up next
• Why “don’t write kids or animals” is terrible advice for screenwriters
• How many drafts (or passes) pros go through before submitting scripts
• What a “thumbnail pitch” is and why it matters for writers today

Key Moments

• 00:00 – Live intro with Geoffrey & Kristy
• 00:40 – Breaking down Weapons and its Rashomon-style POV shifts
• 06:58 – The creepy aunt character and her layered origins
• 11:59 – Reviewing 28 Years Later and its shocking final minutes
• 16:15 – Thematic takeaways: humanity, death, and survival
• 17:58 – Trash screenwriting tip: “Don’t write kids or animals”
• 22:03 – Writing with (or without) passion vs. writing to sell
• 23:29 – Industry chat: the rise of the “thumbnail pitch”
• 26:43 – How many drafts is enough? Geoffrey & Kristy share numbers
• 29:12 – Geoffrey’s red carpet story and calling out a one-draft film
• 30:26 – Live Q&A wrap-up

About the Guest:
Kristy Leigh is a filmmaker and recurring guest of The Successful Screenwriter. She brings a producer’s eye to storytelling, offering practical insight on how scripts translate into production and what writers should consider when developing their stories.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode

• Weapons (dir. Zach Cregger)
• Barbarian
• 28 Years Later

Connect with us

• TheSuccessfulScreenwriter.com
• Instagram: @screenwriterpod
• YouTube: The Successful Screenwriter

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 #ScreenwritingPodcast #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #WeaponsMovie #28YearsLater #ScreenwritingTips #FilmIndustry #LivePodcast

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Horror craft, sequel wins, and loglines that work. Geoffrey and Kristy pull takeaways from The Conjuring, Nobody 2, and the Red Sonja remake. You’ll hear how influence can feel fresh, how a sequel stays fun when tone shifts, and what breaks when character motivation is thin. They wrap with a one-sentence logline formula you can use today. Next week: the Naked Gun reboot and Weapons. Share your worst logline “tips” or a love-it or hate-it watch on Instagram @screenwriterpod and tag us.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode

• How The Conjuring mixes classic influences without feeling dated
• Why Nobody 2 works even with a tonal shift
• Where Red Sonja stumbles on motivation and consistency
• A simple, reliable logline formula and the Die Hard test
• Easy ways to invite audience feedback

Key Moments

• 00:00 Welcome and why The Conjuring still hits
• 00:23 Spotting influences: Amityville open, Exorcist close, Hitchcock nod
• 04:00 Nobody 2: expectations, character carryover, fun factor
• 06:43 to 15:45 Red Sonja remake: motivation, tone, and CGI choices
• 16:14 to 19:58 Bad logline advice debunked and the Die Hard test
• 21:17 Next week’s watch list: Naked Gun reboot and Weapons
• 20:46 to 22:28 Call for listener stories

About the Guest
Kristy Leigh Lussier is a writer and filmmaker who brings sharp story sense and a love for genre cinema.

About the Host
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned

• The Conjuring
• The Conjuring 2
• Nobody and Nobody 2
• Red Sonja (remake)
• John Wick
• Logline examples: Die Hard, Jaws

Connect with us and Join the convo on Instagram via @screenwriterpod and tag Kristy @kantoka127 with your takes.

 Website: TheSuccessfulScreenwriter.com
Instagram: @screenwriterpod
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Hashtags #Screenwriting #Filmmaking #TheConjuring #Nobody2 #RedSonja #Loglines #WritingTips #Podcast

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Geoffrey welcomes writer and filmmaker Kristy Leigh Lussier back for a brand-new hangoute episode. They dive into a horror binge of The Conjuring films, swap takes on wild fairy-tale reimaginings like The Ugly Stepsister, and share some of the worst (and most damaging) screenwriting advice floating around online. Plus, they break down the state of today’s industry and how Kristy rallied a 30-person crew to shoot a vertical micro-drama in Idaho.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode

• A simple Conjuring watch order to start your binge
• Why the first Conjuring still holds up as one of the best modern horror films
• How bold fairy-tale twists like The Ugly Stepsister can inspire fresh writing
• Why “don’t write from your life” is terrible advice
• How to find (or build) your own creative film community

Key Moments

• 00:00 Welcome and new format with Kristy
• 01:27 Why The Conjuring inspires and how it builds tension with heart
• 03:20 The Warrens and casting that anchors the franchise
• 03:56 Where to start with the Conjuring watch order
• 07:10 Geoffrey’s take on The Ugly Stepsister (and a quick content warning)
• 09:20 Public-domain horror trend: Pooh, Bambi, Popeye, Steamboat Willie
• 12:21 Bad advice of the week: “Do not write from your life”
• 16:05 State of the industry and why self-starting matters
• 18:55 Kristy’s vertical micro-drama and how a 30-person crew came together
• 22:33 Final encouragement and plans to continue the series

About the Guest
Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter and filmmaker based in Boise. A horror fan with credits that include The Death of Snow White, she creates character-driven genre stories and recently directed a vertical micro-drama with a local crew.

About the Host
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.
Resources Mentioned in the Episode

• The Conjuring and The Conjuring 2
• Insidious, Saw
• Jaws 50th anniversary IMAX release
• The Ugly Stepsister (Amazon Prime)
• Public-domain horror examples: Winnie the Pooh: Blood and Honey, Bambi reimagining, Steamboat Willie horror
• Vertical micro-dramas and short-form series

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun

• Website: TheSuccessfulScreenwriter.com
• Instagram: @screenwriterpod
• YouTube: The Successful Screenwriter

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#screenwriting #podcast #horror #Conjuring #filmmaking #indiefilm #writingadvice #storytelling #publicdomainhorror

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In this lost episode from the archives, I sit down with the legendary screenwriting guru Linda Seger, author of Making a Good Script Great and a true pioneer of the script consulting profession. We dive deep into her decades of experience shaping stories, her approach to theme, structure, subplots, and images, and why great screenwriters are seekers of the human condition. Linda also shares insights on her new book How to Write Great Dialogue and what continues to inspire her after consulting on thousands of scripts.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How Linda Seger created the career of script consulting in Hollywood
• The importance of images and visual thinking in screenwriting
• Why subplots give your story dimension and depth
• How to approach rewrites with purpose and focus
• Tips for mastering dialogue and emotional shifts in scenes

Key Moments:

• (00:23) Linda’s groundbreaking journey into script consulting
• (03:16) The power of images in storytelling
• (06:39) Scene sequences vs. random scenes
• (08:44) Why theme and central questions matter
• (15:26) Breaking down the value of subplots

About the Guest:
Linda Seger is one of the world’s foremost script consultants, credited with creating the profession itself. She has consulted on over 2,000 scripts, worked with A-list directors like Ron Howard, and written numerous influential books on screenwriting, including Making a Good Script Great and How to Write Great Dialogue.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Making a Good Script Great by Linda Seger
• How to Write Great Dialogue by Linda Seger & John Winston Rainey
• Seger Notes (film breakdown articles)

Connect with Linda Seger:

• Website: lindaseger.com

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• YouTube

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#Screenwriting #LindaSeger #ScriptConsulting #WritingTips #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter

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In this lost episode from the archives, Geoffrey D. Calhoun sits down with screenwriting legend Dave Trottier, aka Dr. Format and author of The Screenwriter’s Bible. Together they explore the evolving rules of formatting, the balance of art and craft in screenwriting, and why clarity and consistency are vital to getting noticed in Hollywood. Dave also shares his insights on scriptments, bolding slug lines, writing natural dialogue, and building characters that leap off the page.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode

• Why screenwriting is both an art and a craft—and how to balance the two
• How formatting guidelines evolve to improve readability for script readers
• The growing trend of “scriptments” and who they really benefit
• Tips on character descriptions that avoid clichés and create depth
• How to write dialogue with clarity, subtext, and natural flow
• Why exposition should emerge naturally rather than through obvious info dumps

Key Moments

• 00:23 – Welcoming Dave Trottier, Dr. Format and author of The Screenwriter’s Bible
• 01:27 – Balancing art and craft in screenwriting
• 03:27 – How formatting evolves with the industry
• 07:45 – The rise of the “scriptment” and Dave’s reaction to it
• 14:30 – Clarity, consistency, and avoiding reader confusion
• 18:20 – Moving past superficial character descriptions
• 23:26 – Writing natural dialogue and handling exposition
• 26:01 – Subtext: one of the last, but most powerful skills to master

About the Guest
Dave Trottier is best known as Dr. Format, the go-to expert on screenwriting rules and formatting. He is the author of the industry-standard book The Screenwriter’s Bible and teaches courses on screenwriting at Script University and through his own platform KeepWriting.com.

About the Host
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode

• The Screenwriter’s Bible by Dave Trottier
• KeepWriting.com – Dave’s official website

#ScreenwritingTips #ScreenwritersBible #LostEpisode #ScreenwritingPodcast #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter

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In this episode of The Successful Screenwriter, Geoffrey D. Calhoun welcomes back Chris Cookson and Thomas Blakely from InkTip to discuss Twisted Vines, a murder mystery feature optioned directly from their platform by writer Tom Stolgren. Together they break down how the film went from script to production, the surprising tone of the finished project, standout performances, and what’s next for the budding franchise.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How Twisted Vines went from an InkTip listing to a produced feature.
• Why the film feels like a blend of Knives Out and Hallmark mystery.
• The creative choices that worked—and the ones that could’ve gone further.
• Behind-the-scenes insight into the writing, rewrites, and final cut.
• Exciting news about a potential sequel in development.

Key Moments:

• 00:22 – Welcoming Chris Cookson & Thomas Blakely from InkTip.
• 00:56 – Breaking down the logline and cast of Twisted Vines.
• 02:13 – Comparing its style to Knives Out and Glass Onion.
• 07:05 – How much of Stolgren’s original script made it to screen.
• 17:22 – Sequel news and what it means for InkTip writers.

About the Guests:
Chris Cookson and Thomas Blakely work with InkTip, the trusted platform connecting screenwriters with vetted producers. Together, they’ve helped countless writers find opportunities that turn into real credits—including Twisted Vines.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in This Episode:

• Watch Twisted Vines on Roku Channel
• Learn more about InkTip

Connect with the Guests:

• InkTip Website

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram: @screenwriterpod
• TikTok: @screenwriterpod

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#Screenwriting #IndieFilm #MurderMystery #InkTip #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter

In this Lost Episode from our archives, Geoffrey D. Calhoun sits down with Philip Eisner, the mind behind the cult classic Event Horizon, for a deep dive into the film’s origins, its Lovecraftian and Warhammer 40k influences, and the psychology of horror. From the ship’s unsettling “personality” to the challenge of keeping audiences engaged without overexplaining, Philip reveals his approach to crafting dread, balancing science with cinematic spectacle, and the lessons learned from working with director Paul W. S. Anderson. They also explore the fine line between horror and thriller, the power of character-driven scares, and Eisner’s collaborations on projects like Sweet Girl.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• The Shining in space pitch that sold Event Horizon
• How Lovecraft and Hellraiser shaped the film’s horror elements
• Why the ship itself became a character—and how that changes the story
• The science vs. spectacle push-and-pull in production
• Writing horror that resonates beyond jump scares
• Navigating collaboration and protecting the work while staying open to change

Key Moments:

• 00:28 – Why Event Horizon still holds up decades later
• 04:26 – Horror as a way to give form to “nameless dread”
• 13:32 – The gravity drive and designing a ship with a soul
• 18:19 – Interpreting the ship’s intentions from a non-human perspective
• 46:06 – Lovecraft, Hellraiser, and hidden influences on Event Horizon

About the Guest:
Philip Eisner is a screenwriter best known for the sci-fi horror Event Horizon, as well as Sweet Girl, co-written with Greg Hurwitz. His work blends high-concept ideas with grounded, psychological depth, and he has collaborated with some of the industry’s top directors and producers.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in This Episode:

• Dance Macabre by Stephen King 
• Event Horizon (1997) 
• Sweet Girl (2021) 

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram: @screenwriterpod
• TikTok: @screenwriterpod

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#EventHorizon #PhilipEisner #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #HorrorWriting #LovecraftianHorror #SciFiHorror

Comedy is back—and it’s hitting hard. In this episode, Geoffrey is joined by returning guest and screenwriter Reece Taylor to break down the wild, absurd brilliance of the new Naked Gun reboot. From slapstick to self-aware parody, they explore why this style of comedy matters now more than ever, and how the film nails both structure and chaos in a way that keeps you laughing well past the credits.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• Why comedy thrives in tough times
• How the new Naked Gun reboot revives Zucker-style humor
• Pam Anderson’s unexpected comedy chops
• Why structure doesn’t matter when the laughs hit
• What today’s filmmakers can learn from absurdism

Key Moments:
00:26 – Why Geoffrey needed this film
01:15 – Is this classic comedy style dead?
04:30 – Visual gags, deadpan delivery, and coffee bits
09:18 – The Frosty the Snowman horror short (?!?)
21:08 – Shame-eating and the bodycam Busta Rhymes scene

About the Guest:
Reece Taylor is a screenwriter, film reviewer, and longtime friend of the show. With a near-completed MFA and sharp industry insight, he brings a passion for storytelling and a love of comedy to every discussion.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Palm Springs (2020) directed by Akiva Schaffer
• Repossessed, High Spirits, and other parody classics
• The Naked Gun reboot (2025)

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod

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#NakedGun #FilmPodcast #ComedyIsBack #ScreenwritingTips #ParodyDoneRight

Geoffrey D. Calhoun welcomes back friend of the show, screenwriter Katie Presto, for a no-holds-barred breakdown of the new Fantastic Four film. From emotional arcs to cosmic stakes, they cover what worked, what surprised them, and why the movie isn’t the camp-fest some critics claim it to be.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• Why the Thing’s character arc hits differently this time
• The subtle emotional depth behind Reed and Sue’s relationship
• How world-building and set design enhance story
• Casting choices that seemed risky but paid off
• How the theme of “family” drives the entire film

Key Moments:
00:22 – First reactions and the film’s 60s retro-futurism
03:05 – Why the Thing’s arc is the emotional core
06:20 – Reed and Sue’s realistic relationship struggles
11:40 – The space birth scene: creative or confusing?
17:14 – The film’s family theme and emotional payoff
20:09 – Franklin’s powers and tragic comic book future
21:08 – Is Reed neurodivergent? A subtle exploration
27:02 – The director’s surprising TV background

About the Guest:
Katie Presto is a screenwriter and longtime friend of the show. She brings a sharp eye and grounded insight into storytelling, structure, and character, especially in genre films. About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Fantastic Four (2025)
• The Guide for Every Screenwriter by Geoffrey D. Calhoun
• Matt Shakman’s filmography (Wandavision, Succession, Game of Thrones)

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:
🌐 Podcast Website
📸 Instagram @screenwriterpod
🎵 TikTok @screenwriterpod

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#FantasticFour2025 #ScreenwritingPodcast #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #ComicBookMovies #MovieBreakdown

Writer-director Paul Etheredge joins Geoffrey to discuss his chilling new horror film The Other. From dream-fueled inspiration to last-minute casting chaos, Paul shares how the film came together—and how it cleverly subverts genre expectations. Plus, a candid look at indie filmmaking challenges, practical effects, and building layered character arcs that flip audience assumptions.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How The Other was inspired by a nightmare and developed into a subversive horror film
• What it’s like collaborating with horror legend Jeffrey Reddick
• Why practical effects are still powerful—and how they pulled it off on a budget
• The unexpected casting journey and how it shaped the film’s tone
• Advice for screenwriters on writing readable, producible scripts

Key Moments:
00:23 – Geoffrey’s horror-fan confession and Paul’s reaction to early screenings
02:10 – Working with Final Destination’s Jeffrey Reddick
04:33 – The nightmare that sparked the idea for The Other
06:36 – Why the film took five years to make
08:30 – Commitment to practical effects and 80s influences
09:43 – Building empathy for a character who first appears dangerous
12:48 – Shawnee Smith’s accidental casting and standout performance
13:54 – The climax rewrite done during the shoot
16:14 – Paul’s blunt advice for screenwriters
17:12 – Getting a Hallmark actress to go dark for horror

About the Guest:
Paul Etheredge is a writer-director known for the cult LGBTQ+ slasher Hellbent and now The Other, a psychological horror film praised for its genre-defying twists. He’s a longtime collaborator with Jeffrey Reddick and brings a wealth of indie filmmaking experience and insight.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• The Other – Available now on Amazon, Apple TV, Roku, and other VOD platforms
• Fangoria Magazine – Featuring The Other on the cover

Connect with the Guest:

• Watch The Other on Amazon
• Paul Etheredge on IMDb

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod

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#HorrorFilm #IndieFilmmaking #ScreenwritingTips #TheOtherMovie #SuccessfulScreenwriterPodcast

In this raw and unfiltered episode, Geoffrey is joined by screenwriter Victoria Male for a bold and heartfelt analysis of James Gunn’s new Superman film. Despite some serious technical difficulties (mic issues) behind the scenes, the conversation soars as the duo dives deep into the film’s subtext, emotional resonance, and what makes this fresh take on the Man of Steel so uniquely effective. From reflections on Gunn’s personal journey to a breakdown of Lex Luthor’s modern menace, this episode is packed with insight, passion, and plenty of laughs.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How James Gunn infuses personal subtext into blockbuster storytelling
• Why the film succeeds with Subversion, Subtext, and Stakes
• The difference between Snyder’s Superman and Gunn’s hopeful hero
• How to write a “personal” script that isn’t autobiographical
• What screenwriters can learn from the supporting cast and character arcs

Key Moments:

• 2:00 – Victoria’s Superman fandom and meeting David Corenswet
• 9:00 – Geoffrey explains the Three S's: Subversion, Subtext, Stakes
• 18:00 – How Gunn redefined Eve Tessmacher and made her matter
• 26:00 – The Justice Gang as a deconstructed Batman
• 33:00 – Lex Luthor’s narcissism, envy, and modern political echoes
• 43:00 – Reimagining Superman’s parents and generational trauma
• 47:00 – The algorithm vs. hope in film criticism

About the Guest:
Victoria Male is a rising screenwriter whose work has earned recognition at the highest level, including placing as a semifinalist in the Academy Nicholl Fellowships. Based in Los Angeles, she spent five years developing projects under Ivan Reitman at The Montecito Picture Company, contributing to major studio films like Ghostbusters: Afterlife. Her writing spans genres from grounded sci-fi to romantic comedy and consistently champions female-driven, emotionally resonant storytelling. Victoria’s pilot Sculpted was also featured on The Love List for top unproduced romance scripts.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Smallville (TV series)
• The Great starring Nicholas Hoult
• Sculpted (Victoria Male’s pilot)
• Sucker Punch, Watchmen, Guardians of the Galaxy
• Geoffrey’s “Three S’s” framework: Subversion, Subtext, Stakes

Connect with the Guest:

• Website: victoriamale.com
• Instagram: @victoriamale

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• TheSuccessfulScreenwriter.com
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod

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In this episode of The Successful Screenwriter, Geoffrey chats with director William McGregor (His Dark Materials, Lockwood & Co., Gwen) about helming Season 2 of The Buccaneers. They discuss how the show evolved in tone, finding a cinematic voice within period dramas, and William’s journey from 48 Hour Film Festivals to international prestige projects. They also dive into pitch decks, visual storytelling, and how his background in commercials shaped his dynamic approach to directing.

✅ What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How to pitch a strong visual take as a TV director
• Why tone shifts matter across seasons
• The cinematic influences behind The Buccaneers
• How William blends commercial and narrative directing
• Breaking in through the 48 Hour Film Project

⏱️ Key Moments: 00:00 – Intro and welcome
00:41 – Evolving tone from Season 1 to Season 2
01:34 – Pitching his visual take with Sofia Coppola and Joe Wright influences
03:28 – Treating key scenes like stylized commercials
04:50 – Reflections on Lockwood & Co. and collaboration with Joe Cornish
05:41 – Directing with intent vs. using a 'oner' for show
07:02 – Transitioning from indie film (Gwen) to high-end TV
07:30 – Off-mic: Starting with 48 Hour Film Fests and the hustle it takes

👤 About the Guest: William McGregor is an acclaimed director known for his work on His Dark Materials, Lockwood & Co., The Buccaneers, and his gothic feature debut Gwen. He began his career in the 48 Hour Film Project and brings a visually bold style shaped by both commercial and narrative work.

🎙️ About the Host: With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

🔗 Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• William McGregor’s film Gwen
• 48 Hour Film Project
• Filmapalooza

🌐 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod

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In this powerful episode of The Successful Screenwriter, Geoffrey sits down with Emmy-winning writer and producer Ron Leshem, the mind behind HBO’s Euphoria and Netflix’s new breakout series Bad Boy. Ron shares the incredible 7-year journey it took to bring Euphoria to the U.S., how Hollywood gatekeepers resist originality, and the creative freedom he found working internationally. This is one of the most inspiring episodes yet — especially for writers navigating today’s cautious industry climate.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• Why Euphoria was rejected by every major U.S. network
• How to stay obsessed with your story when the industry keeps saying no
• The difference between international and Hollywood storytelling
• Why now is the time to write what only you can write
• How Bad Boy evolved from a real story into a global hit

Key Moments:
00:00 – Ron Leshem joins the show and reflects on adapting Euphoria for HBO
01:05 – The 7-year uphill battle to sell Euphoria in the U.S.
06:53 – From Israeli prison journalism to the creation of Bad Boy
10:45 – Revealing the real story behind the main character of Bad Boy
12:01 – Ron’s unfiltered advice for writers in today’s Hollywood
17:58 – Why solitude and leadership both define the modern showrunner

About the Guest:
Ron Leshem is an Emmy-winning writer and producer best known for co-creating Euphoria. A pioneer in adapting international hits for American audiences, his new series Bad Boy is currently streaming worldwide on Netflix. Ron brings a global perspective and fearless storytelling style that sets him apart in today’s TV landscape.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Bad Boy on Netflix
• Euphoria on HBO

Connect with the Guest:
🔗 Ron Leshem on IMDb

 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:
🌐 The Successful Screenwriter Website
📸 Instagram: @screenwriterpod
🎬 TikTok: @screenwriterpod

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This is one of my lost episodes—an incredible deep-dive with writer-director Travis Malloy, known for the cult sci-fi hits Pandorum and Infinity Chamber. We explore how he went from indie shoots in Minneapolis to selling a film in Hollywood, building sets in his garage, and writing stories that studios actually wanted. Travis shares the gritty truth behind low-budget filmmaking, working without a script, and learning to trust his artistic gut. This one’s packed with hard-earned lessons every screenwriter and indie filmmaker should hear.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How Travis sold his first indie film and broke into the studio system
• The origin and evolution of Pandorum from a shelved idea
• How Infinity Chamber was made with no crew, no money—and a ton of grit
• The danger of chasing trends vs. writing what lights you up
• Why limitations can unlock creativity on a contained sci-fi film

Key Moments:

• (01:01) From Minneapolis to Hollywood: Travis’s breakout moment
• (04:08) Turning a failed script into Pandorum
• (09:04) Building Infinity Chamber before writing it
• (20:26) Cutting a twist to strengthen emotional impact
• (35:34) Advice to indie filmmakers: stop waiting, start shooting

About the Guest:
Travis Malloy is the writer-director of Pandorum (starring Ben Foster and Dennis Quaid) and the mind behind the cult hit Infinity Chamber. With deep experience in both studio writing and garage-level indie filmmaking, Travis brings a rare and inspiring perspective to the craft.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Pandorum (2009)
• Infinity Chamber (2016)

 Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod

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Geoffrey sits down with the creative team behind the Slamdance hit Race Walkers: a fresh, hilarious sports comedy about the underdog world of race walking. Directors Kevin Claydon and Phil Moniz, writer-producer Evan Landry, and actor-writers Kevin and Phil share how the film came to life, how Robbie Amell joined the cast, and why comedy in indie film is making a comeback. It’s an inspiring deep dive into how tight scripts, tight friendships, and bold concepts can create magic on screen.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How to build a film concept from the ground up with friends
• Why sports comedies are ready for a resurgence
• The value of staying within your budget and scope as a filmmaker
• How Robbie Amell helped fast-track Race Walkers
• Tips for keeping authenticity when satirizing niche sports

Key Moments:

• (01:06) How the Race Walkers team formed and the concept came to life
• (03:40) Why race walking was a perfect, untapped sports comedy concept
• (05:10) How Robbie Amell and Collective Pictures got involved
• (08:15) Plans for distribution and why comedies belong in theaters
• (12:00) Advice to indie screenwriters on writing within their means

About the Guests:

• Kevin Claydon and Phil Moniz are actor-directors and longtime collaborators behind Race Walkers.
• Evan Landry is a screenwriter and producer on the film. The trio has been creating content together since their 20s.
• Race Walkers stars Robbie Amell and has been gaining acclaim on the festival circuit for its sharp writing and lovable absurdity.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Race Walkers
• Slamdance Film Festival
• Robbie Amell on IMDb

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod

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In this powerful episode, writer-director Evan Ari Kelman joins Geoffrey to discuss his feature debut Barron’s Cove, a gripping thriller that dives into the aftermath of a child's death and the generational trauma left behind. Evan breaks down how real-life inspiration, personal loss, and years of screenwriting study culminated in this bold indie film. From battling Catch-22 casting challenges to landing major talent like Garrett Hedlund and Steven Lang, Evan shares what it really takes to make your first feature — and why sometimes, you just have to write it yourself.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How personal experience shaped the themes of Barron’s Cove
• Tips for breaking through with your first feature film
• The truth about casting name talent as a first-time director
• Screenwriting resources and tools that made a difference
• Why submitting to the Nicholl Fellowship can still open doors

Key Moments:

00:00 – Geoffrey introduces Evan Ari Kelman and Barron’s Cove
00:43 – The inspiration behind the film’s dark, emotional premise
05:48 – Lessons learned from developing Evan’s first feature script
13:11 – How Evan cast major stars and overcame industry obstacles
17:56 – Advice for new filmmakers ready to make their first feature
20:04 – How being a Nicholl semifinalist led to production support

About the Guest:
Evan Ari Kelman is a writer and director whose feature debut Barron’s Cove explores grief, justice, and the scars of generational trauma. A graduate of NYU’s film program, Evan has written and directed multiple award-winning shorts. His work blends grounded emotion with high-stakes storytelling, aiming to challenge audiences while remaining deeply personal. Barron’s Cove premieres June 6 in select theaters and on VOD.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Connect with the Guest:
📸 Instagram: @EvKelm
🎥 Barron’s Cove releases June 6 in select theaters and on VOD

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun: 🌐 The Successful Screenwriter Podcast Website
📸 Instagram: @screenwriterpod
🎵 TikTok: @screenwriterpod

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In this powerful episode, Geoffrey D. Calhoun sits down with acclaimed Dominican filmmaker Jose Maria Cabral to explore his groundbreaking hybrid documentary 42nd Street. The film showcases a grassroots art and music movement born out of the Capotillo neighborhood—a community stigmatized by violence but transformed through relentless creativity and self-expression. From razor blade dances to government crackdowns, this episode dives into the story of a 24/7 street party that became a symbol of survival and resistance.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How 42nd Street captures a real-time cultural revolution in Capotillo
• The power of art as survival in marginalized communities
• Why Jose lived in Capotillo during the writing of the film
• How to approach hybrid documentaries with both realism and care
• Jose’s advice for aspiring documentarians

Key Moments:

• 00:28 – Geoffrey welcomes Jose Maria Cabral to the podcast
• 01:08 – The origins of the 42nd Street movement and its defiance of government control
• 05:11 – The razor blade dance and its symbolism of survival
• 09:49 – How creating the documentary changed Jose personally and creatively
• 14:22 – Jose’s unique tip: filming a “research documentary” before production

About the Guest:
Jose Maria Cabral is an award-winning Dominican filmmaker known for his bold storytelling and social commentary. His latest hybrid documentary 42nd Street has received multiple screenings at South by Southwest, highlighting a vibrant underground movement in Capotillo. Jose’s commitment to authenticity and immersive filmmaking continues to shine a light on unheard voices.

About the Host:
With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• 42nd Street Documentary
• The Guide for Every Screenwriter

Connect with the Guest:

• Instagram – @josemariacabral
• IMDb – Jose Maria Cabral

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod

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Geoffrey sits down with director Jeff Hupp and assistant directors Brian Cusac and Merritt Fritchie, the creative team behind the indie comedy Band on the Run. They share how they turned a pandemic-era script into a completed feature film—shot in just eight days. From grassroots funding to casting Detroit talent and landing distribution, this episode is a masterclass in passion-driven filmmaking.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How to fund your indie film through professional connections
• Why a tight script is key to fast-paced productions
• What makes a multi-director team actually work
• How Detroit’s creative community rallied behind the project
• The honest truth about indie film distribution

Key Moments:
00:30 – The script that started it all
02:45 – Securing funding through local connections
05:24 – First reactions to reading the script
06:01 – Shooting a feature in just 8 days
07:16 – Casting Larry Bagby and local Detroit talent
09:14 – Community support and free locations
11:34 – Directing as a team of three
15:27 – Why they chose Freestyle Digital Media for distribution
17:29 – Navigating QC and post-production headaches
20:00 – Teasing their next film set on Mackinac Island

 About the Guests:
Jeff Hupp is the writer and director of Band on the Run. Brian Cusac and Merritt Fritchie served as assistant directors and longtime creative collaborators. With deep experience in advertising and a shared love of music and film, the trio brought their vision to life through teamwork, local support, and relentless passion.

About the Host:
With films on network television and streaming platforms, Geoffrey is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and passionate about teaching.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Band on the Run Official Website
• Follow @bandontherunmovie on Instagram, Facebook, and TikTok

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod

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In this powerhouse episode, Smokin’ Aces, Narc, and The Grey director Joe Carnahan joins Geoffrey to talk shop. From making Boss Level—his personal “Raiders”—to breaking down his new film Shadow Force, Joe shares unfiltered insight into filmmaking, casting across cultures, and why fun on set brings out the best work. This one’s packed with wisdom and stories you won’t hear anywhere else.

What You’ll Learn in This Episode:

• How Boss Level became Joe’s most personal film
• What inspired Shadow Force and how it came together
• Joe’s perspective on diversity, identity, and creative freedom
• The importance of joy and collaboration on set
• His advice to young filmmakers in today’s industry

Key Moments:
02:05 – Joe discusses the emotional weight behind Boss Level
02:17 – The making of Shadow Force and working with a diverse cast
06:07 – Joe and Geoffrey reflect on working across demographics with respect
10:17 – Why joy on set creates better work
13:04 – Assembling the cast for Shadow Force
15:26 – A candid discussion about Detroit, tax incentives, and lost opportunities
17:12 – Joe’s no-nonsense advice to aspiring filmmakers

About the Guest: Joe Carnahan is a writer/director known for bold, high-impact films like Smokin’ Aces, Narc, The Grey, and Boss Level. Known for his fearless storytelling and energetic direction, Carnahan brings heart and grit to everything he touches.

About the Host: With films on network television and streaming platforms, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and passionate about teaching others to succeed in the industry.

Resources Mentioned in the Episode:

• Boss Level (Hulu)
• Shadow Force (Lionsgate – Theatrical release May 9, 2025)
• The Guide for Every Screenwriter by Geoffrey D. Calhoun

Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun:

• Podcast Website
• Instagram @screenwriterpod
• TikTok @screenwriterpod
• YouTube @thesuccessfulscreenwriter

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