Peter only started sinking when he looked away. That’s the whole point of this story. When our focus is on Jesus, the waves don’t always disappear, but they stop ruling our lives. In this episode, I talk about what happens when you take your eyes off Christ, why the storm suddenly feels so loud, and how keeping your focus on Him changes everything.
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Peter only started sinking when he looked away. That’s the whole point of this story. When our focus is on Jesus, the waves don’t always disappear, but they stop ruling our lives. In this episode, I talk about what happens when you take your eyes off Christ, why the storm suddenly feels so loud, and how keeping your focus on Him changes everything.
Episode 28 - The 5 Ways to Ruin the Opening of Your Book And Make Your Reader Hate You
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3 months ago
Episode 28 - The 5 Ways to Ruin the Opening of Your Book And Make Your Reader Hate You
Want to guarantee your reader never turns page two? In this episode, I’m breaking down five deadly sins of story openings — from worldbuilding overload to hiding your protagonist behind four pages of weather descriptions. We’ll cover why info-dumps kill momentum, how delaying the inciting incident loses trust, and what happens when you open with a side character no one asked for. If you want to hook your reader instead of confuse them, this is how to make your first chapter actually work. ...
Rewind Storytelling
Peter only started sinking when he looked away. That’s the whole point of this story. When our focus is on Jesus, the waves don’t always disappear, but they stop ruling our lives. In this episode, I talk about what happens when you take your eyes off Christ, why the storm suddenly feels so loud, and how keeping your focus on Him changes everything.
